Thursday, August 6, 2020

the wild lab

We were learning about how to make a good pice of writting

I found it easy to re create this pice of writting

I found it challenging to find good punctuation

Next time I will try get it finished on time

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora,
    Vinzent
    I like the way you described pete voice as a uk accent.
    Next time i encourage you to try and make it clear and easier to read.

    Until next time,
    Houston

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