My racing experience

 

Athletics day 2021

 

This was a really fun and it was really easy to remeber about this since yesterday, atleast for this day it is Athletics day.

It got really tricky thinking about all the things that I could add into it so that I can make my piece of writing.

The Fun run!

 

This was a really fun piece of writing even though I had wruten it two weeks ago I couldn't find my original piece and so I had to slap this pice together in half an hour so if there's any mistakes then you know now why. It was a little fustraighting at the time as well.

Muck ups and fun at Doneraille park.

 

As a kid kiwi I love to go on camping trips and drives everywhere and my favorite spot is by far Doneraille park and when I heard that we could write about my favorite place I easily knew that this is the way to go about it. 

It got tough remembering it even though I've been there tweleve times it still came down to how much I did and what one to pick but I choose my tenth time. If you're wondering how I know how many times I've been there it's because I have photos from every time.

I am poem

I am Vinny.

I wonder if it's true that in WW2 the natzis played soccer.

I hear mellow chirps from birds.

I see the lovely linen land.

I want a car.

I pretend nothing.

I feel the roughness in my hands.

I touch the soft grass.

I worry that I'll crash my go kart.

I cry when I'm hurt.

I understand Maths,Reading and what's in a car.

I say things that encourage.

I dream that I was on a boat.

I hope for the best.

I am Vinzent

kayaking

 

I found it easy to find the pictures because there is a new apdate so it doesn't just take you somewhere random.

I found it hard to remember what we were doing while kayaking because we did it two weeks ago and a few days.

Next time I will try be a little bit more quiker in my writing becaue I thin I too a little too long.

kayaking

 

I found it easy to try get as much rich launge that ive ever had probaly.

I found it hard to remeber what we did while kayaking because we did it two weeks ago.

Next time I will try extend tit out more so it will look alot better.

TRYathalon

 

 

 

I found it hard to make out correct punctuation beacause there's so many things that i could add.

We were writing about the triathalon since we just did it and that just helps alot.

 I found it easy to remeber what we did at the triathalon mainley because we did it not long ago.

Next time I could work on my punctuation so my writing level goes up.

Sun flower's

 

We were learning about sun flower's so we could make a blog and post it to our blog's and that way we can have many more post's. I found it easy to come up with the words to discript the sunflower's,It had some hard part's. I found it challenging it to find sun flower's online to put in the blog because their are too lease of sunflower photo's. Next time I will try make my sentences a little better because I fell I could do better.

What Christmas means to me.

 

I found it easy to make up these words because when you ten years old you will know alot about Christmas.

I found it hard to make it look like it was had writen and how many things I could choose of about Christmas.

Next time I will try have 500 words in my next letter.

Hawk on the loose!

 

I found it easy to make my own word boreder because I've been doing it for more then a year.

I found it hard to make the poetry up from only a few videos.

Next time I will try polyline a hawk and put that on the slide plus that could make things look either really intresting or really bad.

I could try make a full line without any imagies or viseos next time so I can really see what I can do.

Fireworks!

 

I enjoyed making the poem beacuse you have so many ways to discribe the fireworks and the poem sunds really fancy when it ryhmes.

Next time I will try make the poem a little more shorter and make it stick out alot so its atractive.

I found it easy to find the gifs beacuse it really only takes five simple steps to finding it and thats good if your in a rush.

I found it hard to get the best and most discrpdive words in the senteces in the poem because when you writing a poem you have alot to think about like what fetures your useing weather it has emotives or not.

What you need in a recount.

 This is what me and my buddy Houston know about 10 things you need to know in a recount.

1.Take a recount that has happend in this week so you know most of the details and this reason is because when you chose something more then one or two weeks ago you forget most of the details.

 2.When you are writting a recount it is something in the past tense and not something that happend right at this momment or after that momment because if it is then thats not a recount.

 3.Make sure you have all  the best punctuation so you get the read hooked in and also try to give a picture in there hed so it really becomes facinateing to the reader.

 4.use your emotions to tell them what happend so it gives a true touch to the recount.

 5.Remember to use only the words that you need for the recount so it doesn't bore the reader.

 6.Use the things that you enjoyed the most to you so they get apart of that joy with you.

 7.Make sure you really try to connect with the reader.

 8.Also remember to use what you smelt,what you herd,what you felt and when it happend.

 9.Remember to use intresting sentance starters.

10.When you are writing a recount you need to have the words then,when and because.

I found it hard to copoperate with my buddy because we keeped talking over eachother but in the end we found a difrence.

I found it easy to help Houston with his spelling because I really like to spell diffrent words after school to help my learning and others.

We were helping and recaping people what we need in a recount to make it good.

 

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